[IP-SFS] Re: AUTH48 - RFC 4824 <draft-ip-sfs-rfc-04.txt> Now Available

[RFC Editor]

Jogi,

Thank you for bringing these errors to our attention!  We have
corrected the text as requested and posted the revised version of the
document at: 

   ftp://ftp.rfc-editor.org/in-notes/authors/rfc4824.txt


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   ftp://ftp.rfc-editor.org/in-notes/authors/rfc4824-diff.html

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**** Please note that if we do not hear any further from you or your
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**** April 2007.

Thank you.

RFC Editor




On Sat, Mar 31, 2007 at 04:41:03AM +0200, Jogi Hofmller wrote:
> RFC Editor,
> 
> I did find some minor changes, noted here in the suggested form. This
> was as quickly as possible and I start to hate time differences a lot ;)
> 
> Regards
> j.hofmueller
> 
> changes:
> 
> Table of Contents
> 
> OLD:
>         3.2. Signal Coding ..............................................4
> NEW:
>         3.2. SFS Coding .................................................4
> 		     ^^^        ^^^
> OLD:
>         4.1. States .....................................................8
> 
> NEW:
>         4.1. Data Link Control ..........................................8
>              ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
> 
> 
> 
> Section 3.1 title
> 
> OLD:
>         3.1.  IP-SFS Frame
> 
> NEW:
>         3.1.  IP-SFS Frame Description
> 		                   ^^^^^^^^^^^
> 
> Section 3.2.1 title
> 
> OLD:
>         3.2.1 IP-SFS Data Signals
> 
> NEW:
>         3.3 IP-SFS Data Signals
>           ^
> 
> Section 3.2.2 title
> 
> OLD:
>         3.2.2 IP-SFS Control Signals
> 
> NEW:
>         3.4 IP-SFS Control Signals
> 		  ^
> 
> Section 3.3 title
> 
> OLD:
>         3.3 Protocol Limitations
> 
> NEW:
>         3.5 Protocol Limitations
> 		  ^
> 
> 
> Section 3.4 title
> 
> OLD:
>         3.4 Implementation Limitations
> 
> NEW:
>         3.6 Implementation Limitations
>           ^
> 
> Section 6. 1st paragraph
> 
> OLD:
>         Manfred Rittler, and Martin Schitter, and Bob Braden for all their
> 
> NEW:
>         Manfred Rittler, Martin Schitter, and Bob Braden for all their        
> 
> 
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